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Thursday 21 May 2020

White Water Rafting Story Starter

“Are you coming or not?” she demanded as she took a few steps further into the water before she was hoping if it was her turn and it was her turn she went on it and it felt weird for him so she told one of the people why is weird so she asked, “why does it feel weird rafter”? He said “ let me help you” she was “ok”.

Then she went off by herself and her dad but when she went off her heart was pounding cause she didn’t know how to do it but lucky her dad was with her so then he asked if she was okay then she said “yes” so then she tried to lay so she took a big deep breath.

Next, it was her friends turn so she went on with her friend and they went off screaming because they were excited when they saw a cave they went in there and it was very dark in there they tried to get out they were cold and soaking wet she called help as loud as they could. 

After that, the rafter guide heard them so they went fast to get ready and they go they were trying to look for them and they couldn't find them so they got something and bring it with them so they saw them where they are so they went there and they were puffing hard so they got water after that.

As if it was their mums and dads turn for them they tried to hide so they can stay there forever so they didn’t move they were just sitting there like a magnet so the girls were getting freaked out but they were taking a deep breath and they were calm but there mums and dads were swimming and they were having fun.

Finally they Rafting Guide just got ready to go and look if they need help the teen wanted to go with them so they can see them if they passed away and the mums and dads were screaming so the Rafting Guide and the teen went and they saw them but the mums and dads were screaming because they were having fun.

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