One beautiful sunny day there was a family who wanted to go for a trip to Hawaii so then they packed up.
After that they went on the Plan and when they went inside they were so excited to go to Hawaii and when they landed they went to motel Next to a beach.
Next the put there so case away and went for a walk and when they started to walk they walked around the beach and then saw something and what the found was a rock pool and one of the daughter from they said there mum “can we please swim in the” and then the mum said “yes” so then they ran inside the motel and got there swimming togs and they went back to the rock pool and so then went swimming but first went on the ladder and did a canet ball.
After that the were so tired so then they went to the motel and went for a shower and then they went to get changed and then they went to go sleep.But the mum and dad went to the rock pool and sawm.
Finally the kids woke up and went to find there mum and dad but they couldn't find then so then the sister said “where are you mum and dad?” They asked, so then something happened.
To Be Continued...
Hey Vika it's me Sesilia I like your story about the trip to Hawaii. But you can keep writing like that, but please proof read this writing. But check the last bar of your story. From your friend Sesilia.
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