Persuasive writing

Why should kids get paid to go to school.

I completely Disagree because kids come to school to learn and kids didn't come to school to get paid

1) I believed that students should attend school to receive an education, during which they should take jobs and earn money.

2)Another point is that you attended class to study and not to earn cash.

3)You're very young for money, but they've learned over time to learn.

4)Why do you involve money, but even if you receive money from your parents, simply return it to them.

5)Kids also came to school and study, but you would earn a scholarship if you went to college.

6)You should not be hired since you will be able to make smart decisions when you graduate.

7)It is a personality that children must not be paid and instead attend school to learn.

8)It's also your personality that students should not be paid and should attend school to learn.

Clearly kids should not attend school because of how they should learn and not get paid because on the way to college you should make good grades and good choices. 

Why do kids need money is not very important.

 So that's why kids should not get paid. 

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