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Thursday, 16 April 2020

Dinosaurs Has Been Found

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Writing about creatures


Title of story: dinosaurs has been found




One day there was a school called Point England and this little girl came out of her school.





Then she went to the bus stop and there was a bus and the bus person said “where are you going to” and then the little girl said “I would like to go to the dinosaur land please” then the bus person said “okay jump in” so then off they went.





After that everyone was gone then there was the dinosaurs Land and then she looked everywhere then she was scared so then she slept in this cave. Next day she woke up and there were lots of creatures there so she went to one of the creatures and pet then the creature liked it.

1 comment:

  1. Malo Vika,

    Hope you are well and safe nice to see you doing your online school work,would love to read some more of your work during the lock down.Maybe you could write about what you have done while in lock down

    Keep up the writing
    Tyson Puru

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